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Coagulated Sentences (Free verse) by J.B. Manning
it Sickens me
to See your Silly Smile
So Silently
Seductive
your Complexities
Consume my every
Complicated thought
and leave me Cold
Stop Sucking
up my Strength
with Silence
that Stretches thinner
than my Stomach lining
every time you Say
Iâm Sorry
Contemplate the meaning
of your Constipated
Context while I
Continue to ignore you
without Style
you Say to me
you're Stricken with
Some Symptom
of Severity
and Still I Say
without a Smile
Goodbye!
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Posted: September 24, 2003 3:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 1:59 PM PDT
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"your Stricken with" (you're)