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Coagulated Sentences (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

it Sickens me to See your Silly Smile So Silently Seductive your Complexities Consume my every Complicated thought and leave me Cold Stop Sucking up my Strength with Silence that Stretches thinner than my Stomach lining every time you Say I’m Sorry Contemplate the meaning of your Constipated Context while I Continue to ignore you without Style you Say to me you're Stricken with Some Symptom of Severity and Still I Say without a Smile Goodbye!

J.B. Manning 25-Sep-03/2:01 PM
better?




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