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Blood (Free verse) by Artemis745
Blood dripping slowly,
Down further in a stream;
Flowing to the heavens
Texturizing thy sight.
A single hair
Festers the wound,
Defensive attack
Against limitless beasts.
Egotistical adrenaline boost
Creating an incomprehensible sinister,
One out stepping intangible boundaries.
None can battle successfully
Their own soul
And the demons within
Created by each other.
Our spirituality breaks
Our minds
As it frugally invades all that remains.
Now all that lives
Suffers throughout its body,
Weak faith being destroyed
Because its purpose has no meaning.
Bloody remains of a diverged soul
Lost aimlessly in its world
Controlled by fear.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9832
Posted: September 15, 2003 6:32 AM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2003 6:32 AM PDT
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