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systematic turbulence (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
Intimidated by lifeâs frustrations I am discouraged
I hurdle under my thoughts
I am lost and scurrying for guidance
Guidance from myself
I lack understanding of the visions
The impulses are overwhelming
I exile all emotion hoping for distortion
Together we should all make the acquaintance of serenity
I am aroused by systematic turbulence
I listened to the truth before it was even spoken
Lost in a divided world
Divisions of perception so sightless that my eyes bleed
I see lies stabbing me into the darkness
Blindly I stay lost but I search for the truth in the words
I listen to the vibrations of forthrightness luring me
I alone canât scream loud enough for the world to hear me
So I am left helpless by devotion
A premeditated uncertainty denounced before me
I figured the possibilities
But they didnât figure me
I saw myself soar with the grace of an angel
I was determined to forget
But I was forgotten and left with regret
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Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9831
Posted: August 21, 2003 12:28 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 12:28 PM PDT
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