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this meal was knowledge (Free verse) by nentwined This meal was
"MADE IN CHINA"
thousands of years ago
with parts that very well could have been
g . r . o . w . n
here, this Not China where I live and
e . a . t
this sum of knowledge exported by mind
in standards of the time,
imported after implementation,
instantiation,
this sum of knowledge
is rendered moot in the
babel of the bowels,
food for some other living entity:
Unmade in the U. S. of A.
like so many other things.
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Posted: September 23, 2003 9:35 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2003 9:35 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.821063 Overall Rank: 367 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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I agree. Nice piece.
drivel.
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I would come up with a more repugnantly digestive phrase for 'rendered moot'. Also I would delete the 'food for some other living entity' line. Some buffing here and there and I would be proud to call it my baby.
We do grow some good shit here every now and then, though, you have to admit.