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levered 'n loved (Ode) by A. Nomaly complete inside a country
with no king to decide just
one flat line of crisp horizon
way far off in a distance to look
out
Up the ladder:
Insight
Down the ladder:
Historical Epic
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Posted: September 15, 2003 11:57 AM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2003 11:57 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0476813 Overall Rank: 6865 Comments:
Felt it was a good beginning, makes one point but not enough there to really grab me and keep my interest
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