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levered 'n loved (Ode) by A. Nomaly

complete inside a country with no king to decide just one flat line of crisp horizon way far off in a distance to look out

Jill Stockinger 15-Sep-03/4:04 PM
Felt it was a good beginning, makes one point but not enough there to really grab me and keep my interest




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