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selflessness (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
A raging symphony circulating through one's mind
Patriotic rebellion has captured time
Lost glances guide me to understand
Sometimes a man canât identify with the choices of man
I cherished the time we tried to pretend
But reality prevailed in the end
Respect the brutality of the tides cause at times it isnât your choice
to decide
An ambiance of fidelity
Etched in stone and civilly served
The naked eye is sensitive to the light
A light that can echo and make you feel life
A virgin, wrenchingly pure of treachery
An ambiance of fidelity
It is not your choice
It is not his or her choice
It is the choice of the decider
Residing in the light of darkness
Prominent arrays of solitude confine minds to hate
My virgin will never taste soulful rage
An ambiance of fidelity is the solidarity
Unfortunate despair
We long for enlightenment
Uncomfortable longing
The sunlight kissed my mind and I was reborn
My body unchanged yet my soul is new
My wishes and wants immaculate
A pathetic incoherent path of conventional virtue
I violently ripped off all my likenesses
I am different
I want to be different
I want to be cured from this sameness.
I donât see parallel images
I donât hear encouragement
I wished you here to listen
I want to be different
Who am I?
I am not you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10058
Posted: August 21, 2003 12:35 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 12:35 PM PDT
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