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The Beginning of the End (Free verse) by justjay Problems of life
FLASH before my eyes.
An endless tumble of pieces.
Little things become big;
big things become bigger.
Where will it stop?
I'm afraid that it will never stop.
Going on until i completely-
and utterly break down.
The end of nothing-
yet everything.
The beginning of the end.
Up the ladder:
midnight, on a weekday
Down the ladder:
My Might
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Posted: August 17, 2003 7:11 PM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2003 7:11 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8567 Comments:
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Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13
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17-Aug-03/8:00 PM
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you got emotions... try to express it better... 4
A peerless, saturated jock strap of meaningless rhetoric.
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