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Free verse № 60977

The Beginning of the End

by justjay

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

Problems of life FLASH before my eyes. An endless tumble of pieces. Little things become big; big things become bigger. Where will it stop? I'm afraid that it will never stop. Going on until i completely- and utterly break down. The end of nothing- yet everything. The beginning of the end.

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[4] Lifeboatman 17-Aug-03/8:00 PM Reply
you got emotions... try to express it better... 4
[10] Stephen Robins 7-May-04/8:42 AM Reply
A peerless, saturated jock strap of meaningless rhetoric.