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The Beginning of the End (Free verse) by justjay

Problems of life FLASH before my eyes. An endless tumble of pieces. Little things become big; big things become bigger. Where will it stop? I'm afraid that it will never stop. Going on until i completely- and utterly break down. The end of nothing- yet everything. The beginning of the end.

Lifeboatman 17-Aug-03/8:00 PM
you got emotions... try to express it better... 4




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