Love

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

You cannot see it, You cannot catch it, Yet it can change Everything around you. It is mighty, It is powerful, It leaves you weak And irrational. Like a drug It leaves you Helpless and Wanting more. Love is a sickeness, With no cure leaving you Light-headed or With heart-ache, Love is the only Thing we all have Experience of Over all love rules supreme.

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[6] cleverdevice 6-Aug-03/1:47 PM Reply

Hmm, cliched, but not as bad as 'Angel' by Misteriac. -6-

[6] cleverdevice 6-Aug-03/1:47 PM Reply

Hmm, cliched, but not as bad as 'Angel' by Misteriac. -6-

[5] http://mulberryfairy 6-Aug-03/5:17 PM Reply

Could use some commas, some phrases ran together and became difficult to read. Misspelled "sickness".

[0] Lifeboatman 6-Aug-03/8:24 PM Reply

And you had marred its name... if this is all that we are here to see, I'd rather stick an elephant in my sphincter... Ouch!!!... 0