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Love (Free verse) by Ditchamal
You cannot see it, You cannot catch it, Yet it can change Everything around you. It is mighty, It is powerful, It leaves you weak And irrational. Like a drug It leaves you Helpless and Wanting more. Love is a sickeness, With no cure leaving you Light-headed or With heart-ache, Love is the only Thing we all have Experience of Over all love rules supreme.


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.714286
Weighted score: 4.9231596
Overall Rank: 9398
Posted: August 6, 2003 11:16 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2003 11:16 AM PDT
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[6]... cleverdevice @ 81.131.0.159 | 6-Aug-03/1:47 PM | Reply
Hmm, cliched, but not as bad as 'Angel' by Misteriac. -6-
[6]... cleverdevice @ 81.131.0.159 | 6-Aug-03/1:47 PM | Reply
Hmm, cliched, but not as bad as 'Angel' by Misteriac. -6-
[5] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.47 | 6-Aug-03/5:17 PM | Reply
Could use some commas, some phrases ran together and became difficult to read. Misspelled "sickness".
[0] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13 | 6-Aug-03/8:24 PM | Reply
And you had marred its name... if this is all that we are here to see, I'd rather stick an elephant in my sphincter... Ouch!!!... 0
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