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Love (Free verse) by Ditchamal

You cannot see it, You cannot catch it, Yet it can change Everything around you. It is mighty, It is powerful, It leaves you weak And irrational. Like a drug It leaves you Helpless and Wanting more. Love is a sickeness, With no cure leaving you Light-headed or With heart-ache, Love is the only Thing we all have Experience of Over all love rules supreme.

http://mulberryfairy 6-Aug-03/5:17 PM
Could use some commas, some phrases ran together and became difficult to read. Misspelled "sickness".




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