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Club (Free verse) by Beseech
Club
Nought but the rattling of drinks
and the chitchat of guests.
The gentle swaying of cords, blinds fully raised
Flowers, white, vibrate with us all
Two lapshades join in the fun
Another just like ours, passes on our left
As our forward facing view shows blue
Two shades mix, a coastline appears
Cliffs, and a beach fade into view,
horses all around, appear and disappear
A beacon too, and a ship
Obscured by window frame, now appears
Gentle rise, gentle fall
Sway to the left, sway to the right.
A village appears, upon the land
white houses mixed in with the brown
"A sight to see" says the club class waitress
But I am not here
I am gone
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5565
Posted: July 30, 2003 12:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 2:44 AM PDT
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Also, Beseech, rattle is only "wrattle", if you've got the vulva of a lamb, but the head of a jackass.