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by Southern_Bell

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Jul 2003 · 7 comments

MAY DARKNESS BEFALL ALL OF YOU WHO READ THIS SITE AND DEATH BE YOUR SWEET REWARD!! In the darkness they come howling at the night Born of fresh blood and a devils sight Weeping at the night's full moonlight Oh what a ghastly sight! Death on every street corner light Hanging there and waiting for their new plight Gazing out with death filled eyes upon the forgotten night Never seeing what was there or what was right Now they sink to the holes of hell Never looking back on the choas and maime they caused.

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[n/a] richa 24-Jul-03/11:40 PM Reply
If you are going to use the same rhyme sound for every line you should probably not repeat words night and sight. The words are a bit simple too.

Check out 'I am the gayest' i think by Dark angel for an example of this form (in best list)
[n/a] Southern_Bell › richa 24-Jul-03/11:41 PM Reply
ok thanks. besides i was thinking of editing it any way.
[n/a] walrus8 › Southern_Bell 25-Jul-03/9:28 AM Reply
bite, blight, bright, cite, fight, flight, fright, height, kite, knight, light, might, plight, quite, right, sight, site, sleight, slight, spite, sprite, tight, trite, white, write, alight, bomb site, box kite, brake light, contrite, delight, despite, dog bite, egg white, excite, first light, flea bite, forthright, gang fight, green light, head blight, hold tight, ignite, incite, indict, indite, invite, in flight, in sight, knife fight, land site, large white, late blight, leaf blight, onsite, outright, own right, polite, put right, rear light, recite, red light, rewrite, sit tight, stage fright, take flight, tonight, upright, uptight, white knight ... etc
[n/a] Southern_Bell › walrus8 25-Jul-03/12:54 PM Reply
Hey thanks for all the ryhming schemes i might use one later on.
[n/a] DurtKL › Southern_Bell 25-Jul-03/1:07 PM Reply
lol hurry or i'll steal it
[n/a] Caducus 25-Jul-03/8:05 AM Reply
get rid of new plight, plight will suffice. Cut the digression of the obvious lines and your getting there
[3] cyan9 18-Jan-06/9:37 AM Reply
The statement is too true, but the poem is crap.