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Untitled (Free verse) by helpfulpoems
i loved you with all my heart
but then my dreams you tore apart
kissings under an oak tree
one of the things i wished could be
they lov we shared was special
a dream come true
without you i'd be sad and blue
you glowed with such a light
it made my smile shine so bright
your love for me seemed deep and true
forever i wished to be with you
every day spent in your arms
made me feel safe and out of harm
our realationshipheaded in the right direction
we had a great connection
and loved to show affection
i soon saw something was strange
your feelings for me seemed to change
our love so strong and fuflilling
didnt seem great or thrilling
our once connected hearts
were slowly growing apart
all i remember is anger and tears
why would you do this after all thoose years
u made my life complete
you were always so sweet
i want you to know i love you still
and i always wil
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10614
Posted: July 11, 2003 1:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2003 1:29 PM PDT
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