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Untitled (Free verse) by helpfulpoems
i loved you with all my heart but then my dreams you tore apart kissings under an oak tree one of the things i wished could be they lov we shared was special a dream come true without you i'd be sad and blue you glowed with such a light it made my smile shine so bright your love for me seemed deep and true forever i wished to be with you every day spent in your arms made me feel safe and out of harm our realationshipheaded in the right direction we had a great connection and loved to show affection i soon saw something was strange your feelings for me seemed to change our love so strong and fuflilling didnt seem great or thrilling our once connected hearts were slowly growing apart all i remember is anger and tears why would you do this after all thoose years u made my life complete you were always so sweet i want you to know i love you still and i always wil

Up the ladder: My friend
Down the ladder: The Musician

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10608
Posted: July 11, 2003 1:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2003 1:29 PM PDT
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[3] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Jul-03/1:37 PM | Reply
TIMMY!ah ti ti ti timmMY!TIMAHY!
[n/a] helpfulpoems @ 205.188.208.165 > horus8 | 11-Jul-03/5:41 PM | Reply
what do u mean by that
[3] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.169.47 | 12-Jul-03/3:19 AM | Reply
Hrmm.. I wasn't aware that we had 12 year olds posting stuff here.... blessed with a three.
[n/a] helpfulpoems @ 152.163.253.38 > SupremeDreamer | 13-Jul-03/2:52 PM | Reply
12 oh u wish pleaz dont get mad b/c im good im sowwie ur mad not
dont hate
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