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sink (Free verse) by daniella
doesn't really matter how far gone you go when you come up from water it only makes the drowning slow.

Up the ladder: With Words
Down the ladder: -=Words_From_Dark_Angel=-

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4867
Posted: June 20, 2003 10:06 PM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2003 10:06 PM PDT
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[10] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jun-03/6:24 AM | Reply
Excellent!
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.196.106 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 7-Jul-03/7:37 PM | Reply
;)
[8] richa @ 195.92.168.172 | 22-Jun-03/6:39 AM | Reply
yes nice little rhyme and insight
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