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With Words (Lyric) by hotwire
You don't seem to want to understand That your abusing not with your hands Words cut deep into me and hurt even if I don't bleed What is it You expect from me To be your bitch and let you lead You may have paid the bills and bought nice things But ownership never came with that ring Who brainwashed you into this marital slavery The more you talk the less of me you see The issues and problems of my life are mine And are for me to deal with on my own time It's to bad you see people as things to own I think it's time for you to stand alone I'm done watching you be absurd It's time you learn you hurt me with words.

Up the ladder: Heil Pope
Down the ladder: sink

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4866
Posted: June 3, 2003 9:31 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 9:31 PM PDT
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[10] ==Doylum @ 80.225.174.9 | 25-Sep-03/8:46 AM | Reply
ACE
Are you ACE as well?
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