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Heil Pope (Senryu) by Caducus Hitler youths chants Heil
Red and black on blue and blonde
A young Pope salutes.
Up the ladder:
Strung
Down the ladder:
With Words
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Posted: March 28, 2003 7:03 AM PST; Last modified: June 2, 2006 2:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4865 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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2-Jun-06/11:23 AM
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I get the point of this, but I feel it would be stronger if it was less direct. 'Heil Father' would make for a catchier title, and 'heil' is an awkward word to use in a haiku because the way it's pronounced is borderline 1-2 syllables ('hai-yull').
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