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Good Bye (Free verse) by JoeDiamond252 Gristled yellow daiseys crumble
stars fade from shine
beautiful faces shrink to dust
even the mighty sun
is murdered by the dark
every diamond is just a stone
bright nights soon lead to dark days
Golden rings drop to the ground
all i can really say
is you never loved me anyway
Up the ladder:
The
Down the ladder:
Cold Spiral
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Posted: June 17, 2003 1:21 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 1:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.602657 Overall Rank: 12501 Comments:
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pressed a steel barrel to my temple
cocked the gun with her fist.
Raped my shine.
Even the mighty sun, someday will
Be murdered
By the dark.
There's your poem kiddo. The rest is trash. Think, boy. I would have given this a three, maybe, but you dropped to new levels at the pitiful end.