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The (Free verse) by Dangzter
The string was strung
The towel was wrung
The nuse was tied
The laughter had died
The tears were blocced
The numbers were chalked
The bodies were laid
The hate won't fade
The swinging began
The parents ran
The rope was tight
The blacc of night
The body was cold
The story was told
The life was succed
The throat had cut
The eyes were red
The worms were fed
The rooms were hollow
The words won't follow
The flowers are laid
The dues were paid
The pain subsides
The story of teen suicide.
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Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12500
Posted: June 17, 2003 12:14 AM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 12:14 AM PDT
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