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Blue Tarp (Lyric) by hotwire
By Bily Foster I can't believe after everything we've been through Your focused on something cheap and blue A cheap tarp that can be gotten any place is as important to you as satin and lace After providing shelter, friendship, and food All those months and now your so rude What is it you're trying to hide That you need that blue tarp by your side A cheap tarp that can be gotten any place Is as important to you as satin and lace Now you see it's esculated and now that blue tarp has got me jaded I really believed in you tried it your way Even after all the hurtful things you say But it's time to uncover the truth what is it you hide the fact that your scared or that you lied Maybe lied is to harsh a word but wait your the one being ubsurd You tell the story through your eyes I guess forgetting facts doesn't count as lies A cheap tarp that can be gotten any place Is as important to you as satin and lace So focused on the tarp that you call me lazy Even though I felt sick and crazy It's a blue tarp worth six dollars It is really worth all this whoop and holler Change your focus change your life Your the one causing all your stryfe You wish people dead oh wait that isn't what you said You were just upset Now look at who's the one with regret You tell people their wasting their lives But we don't care where that blue tarp lies

Up the ladder: sand between the toes
Down the ladder: Humans

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6265
Posted: June 17, 2003 8:01 AM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 8:01 AM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Jun-03/11:41 AM | Reply
A wolf in sheeps clothing. sucker, but a brilliant pimple poem none the less have siete and shoe
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