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sand between the toes (Free verse) by pacleves jaded moon across the ocean tide
!! ripple through my feet alive!!
dont stop the crushing of the waves
because my soul will concave
upon itself and lose its meaning
and flow into the white foam tide receeding
Up the ladder:
the shadowless night
Down the ladder:
Blue Tarp
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Posted: June 6, 2003 7:40 PM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2003 7:40 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6264 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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6-Jun-03/8:28 PM
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Remember when Godzilla fought monster zero? just kidding. 7. but just barely.
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