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the shadowless night (Free verse) by crwncka1
for these long nights for these long nights filled with shadows these shadowy nights for creepiness they add to the nighttime atmosphere to the nighttime drama to the nighttime scenery to the life of the night for there are shadows i see i see everywhere on this night on this the darkest of nights on this one dark night in particular shadows of all types some darker then others but theirs this one this one in particular that i notice that is i say the darkest of all for it is the one the one that i myself cast this is the one i tell of for it seems to be forever black on this the darkest of nights that i speak of black shadow of mine please speak to me for tell me why why it is your so black for you cause me agony for you cause me grief for you cause me guilt for you cause me pain well let tonight be the night the one night that i no longer see you as you have grown forever black

Up the ladder: Sanctuary
Down the ladder: sand between the toes

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6263
Posted: May 30, 2003 4:40 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2003 4:40 PM PDT
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[6] Angelicasassy @ 132.170.163.239 | 6-Feb-06/9:04 AM | Reply
this started great and faded really fast.
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