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Free verse № 50922

the shadowless night

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 May 2003 · 1 comment

for these long nights for these long nights filled with shadows these shadowy nights for creepiness they add to the nighttime atmosphere to the nighttime drama to the nighttime scenery to the life of the night for there are shadows i see i see everywhere on this night on this the darkest of nights on this one dark night in particular shadows of all types some darker then others but theirs this one this one in particular that i notice that is i say the darkest of all for it is the one the one that i myself cast this is the one i tell of for it seems to be forever black on this the darkest of nights that i speak of black shadow of mine please speak to me for tell me why why it is your so black for you cause me agony for you cause me grief for you cause me guilt for you cause me pain well let tonight be the night the one night that i no longer see you as you have grown forever black

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[6] Angelicasassy 6-Feb-06/9:04 AM Reply
this started great and faded really fast.