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Free verse № 48125

Infedelity

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

I'm not stupid I know where you were I know you loved her and its alright No really ,love Don't try to fight it We've been falling apart for so long now And nothing can change that It might have been nice, if you could have talked to me but you couldn't. I accept that and I accept that you're an unfaithful git That's OK too, It means I can finish with you and not feel bad You can leave right now No need to pack your bags I've done that for you You'll find what's left in the road Some of it might be broken though By that lorry that just went past So, seems there's nothing left to say Except goodbye What?, the ring? No, I'll keep that thanks It looks good on me Shame you don't anymore So as you leave Can you shut the door You need to be reminded You don't live here anymore.

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[7] horus8 27-Apr-03/8:53 PM Reply
the lorry must be some sort of fruit vending mule cart correct?