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Free verse № 48174

Dream

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

I walk along the sandy dune, I look up at the sparkling moon, I let the water touch my feet, I can still feel the last days heat, I think of you and wonder where you are, I touch my chest and feel my heart, I close my eyes and i see your face, I pray your in a better place, I drop my bottle and forward on, I feel my head it weighs a ton, I stumble up to the rocky edge, I gaze out far and see god's hedge, I realize that is where you'll be, I glance out further it's you i see, I could jump and be with you, I know you wouldn't want me too, I could choose to stay right here, I think of a life without you - i fear, I jump it's dark then there's a light, I push toward it with all my might, I squint and see you there i quake, I toss and turn then i wake, I look to my side and your there too, I realize i'd do anything for you.

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