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Dream (Free verse) by Cali
I walk along the sandy dune,
I look up at the sparkling moon,
I let the water touch my feet,
I can still feel the last days heat,
I think of you and wonder where you are,
I touch my chest and feel my heart,
I close my eyes and i see your face,
I pray your in a better place,
I drop my bottle and forward on,
I feel my head it weighs a ton,
I stumble up to the rocky edge,
I gaze out far and see god's hedge,
I realize that is where you'll be,
I glance out further it's you i see,
I could jump and be with you,
I know you wouldn't want me too,
I could choose to stay right here,
I think of a life without you - i fear,
I jump it's dark then there's a light,
I push toward it with all my might,
I squint and see you there i quake,
I toss and turn then i wake,
I look to my side and your there too,
I realize i'd do anything for you.
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Overall Rank: 12136
Posted: April 28, 2003 6:37 AM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 6:37 AM PDT
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