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Only in humility

Member since 2001 · Posted 22 Apr 2003 · 4 comments

Only in humility Can there be love How I yearn to be without me to be prideless in humility There can be no rhythm on a shallow surface no sound on a wavering string Watch, how i move my eyes restless unfocused These sights around me in the picture - unpainted on a mirrored canvas Streaks of colors reds and whites with a broken brush Can you not sense my reminence my apology to you to myself

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[n/a] deleted user 22-Apr-03/6:10 PM Reply

r u tryin to describe humility?

[n/a] Amelia 23-Apr-03/7:54 AM Reply

I don't mean to sound dumb but where exactly are you going with the poem? and are you trying to say Reminiscence or eminence in the third line from the last? I don't think reminence is correct.

[8] shadowaura 21-Sep-03/8:25 PM Reply

makes me feel inadequate, somehow
works like this make me wonder why i even bother writing
8/10

[9] deleted user 29-Jan-04/10:05 AM Reply

i think you should become a proffesional...i've been reading these to a friend of mine and she's fallen in love with them...she said they are some of the most well written she's seen yet on poemranker...i'll have to agree.