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Only in humility (Free verse) by mozac

Only in humility Can there be love How I yearn to be without me to be prideless in humility There can be no rhythm on a shallow surface no sound on a wavering string Watch, how i move my eyes restless unfocused These sights around me in the picture - unpainted on a mirrored canvas Streaks of colors reds and whites with a broken brush Can you not sense my reminence my apology to you to myself

Santeria 29-Jan-04/10:05 AM
i think you should become a proffesional...i've been reading these to a friend of mine and she's fallen in love with them...she said they are some of the most well written she's seen yet on poemranker...i'll have to agree.




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