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Only in humility (Free verse) by mozac

Only in humility Can there be love How I yearn to be without me to be prideless in humility There can be no rhythm on a shallow surface no sound on a wavering string Watch, how i move my eyes restless unfocused These sights around me in the picture - unpainted on a mirrored canvas Streaks of colors reds and whites with a broken brush Can you not sense my reminence my apology to you to myself

shadowaura 21-Sep-03/8:25 PM
makes me feel inadequate, somehow
works like this make me wonder why i even bother writing
8/10




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