poemranker ::Shut up and Dance by NeeMan

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Free verse № 4603

Shut up and Dance

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Becoming none more than a shell containing Celtic thoughts of wisdom Psychedelic spirits from which it inherits paranoia Toxic psychosis Hell Captivity through wicked spells Self-summoned serotonin cells Beware, the rhythm rips apart from mild neurosis and euphoric wishing wells Dwelling through darkness, sweet oh children of the night Slaves to rhythm recklessly wrecked our ships on trips of self-inflicted heat.

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3 comments

[10] horus8 15-Jul-02/12:40 AM Reply
Dead city radio. u r rollin. thanks for the dessert. Hermes Trigamestus
[5] Red_is_life 15-Jul-02/2:25 AM Reply
Title does nothing for the poem.
[6] powerline 15-Jul-02/8:42 AM Reply
keep at it. A little more structure is needed. Images are right on the mark.