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Shut up and Dance (Free verse) by NeeMan
Becoming none more than a shell containing Celtic thoughts of wisdom Psychedelic spirits from which it inherits paranoia Toxic psychosis Hell Captivity through wicked spells Self-summoned serotonin cells Beware, the rhythm rips apart from mild neurosis and euphoric wishing wells Dwelling through darkness, sweet oh children of the night Slaves to rhythm recklessly wrecked our ships on trips of self-inflicted heat.

Up the ladder: What am I?
Down the ladder: A poem from the sky

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4444447
Weighted score: 4.7222223
Overall Rank: 11854
Posted: July 15, 2002 12:16 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 12:16 AM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jul-02/12:40 AM | Reply
Dead city radio. u r rollin. thanks for the dessert. Hermes Trigamestus
[5] Red_is_life @ 212.219.59.126 | 15-Jul-02/2:25 AM | Reply
Title does nothing for the poem.
[6] powerline @ 141.154.247.21 | 15-Jul-02/8:42 AM | Reply
keep at it. A little more structure is needed. Images are right on the mark.
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