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What am I? (Free verse) by Voth269
I am close to all things that accept me, I come in many colors shapes and sizes, I hear your secrets, I know your fears, I heal you when you're hurt, I comfort you when you're sad, I will hold you when you're lonely, I strengthen you when you're weak. I am near you until you push me away, I may be more than one thing to you. What am I? That can be simple enough, For you know what I am, But maybe the question is who am I? The answers short. Am I a parent? Or maybe a brother, Could that be a sister? How about a neighbor? What about other family? Or an animal? I am all these things. I take all of these forms and more, For I am a friend.

Up the ladder: photograph ii
Down the ladder: Shut up and Dance

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4444447
Weighted score: 4.7222223
Overall Rank: 11858
Posted: July 9, 2002 1:04 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 1:04 PM PDT
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.246.32.83 | 11-Jul-02/12:14 PM | Reply
what a lovely poem...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 11-Jul-02/5:37 PM | Reply
You must have spent years in an underground cliche factory to come up with such a wondrously tedious sentiment.
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