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The Crucible (Free verse) by Win
For how long must I burn? How long shall I await your love? When will I ever learn? Beware lest I discover when the dross dissolves away the true mettle in my heart and leave you for always Why should I be refined? as if my love were not enough Why, if you search the whole wide earth you'll never chance to find a love like this, a heart as good and true as mine Be careful how you handle me Someday your luck could turn and you might find out for yourself what it is to burn

Up the ladder: You
Down the ladder: An Undulation in Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.5517645
Overall Rank: 12674
Posted: July 14, 2002 8:53 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 8:53 PM PDT
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