Trust?

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jul 2002 · Edited 13 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

As the earth slows, Promises of love are vanquished in the sky. Put yourself in my shoes. As darkness closes in around you, And lies drip from your lips, I die a little more each time...forever.

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[7] sapphire_rain7 12-Jul-02/9:45 PM Reply

i like how you put so much into one short poem. some people can write epic long poems, and still not really say anything.

[8] deleted user 28-Aug-02/11:45 AM Reply

Everything fits so well together - the title, the words, the emotions ... I feel like I can put myself in your shoes - very well done!