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Trust? (Free verse) by daehtop

As the earth slows, Promises of love are vanquished in the sky. Put yourself in my shoes. As darkness closes in around you, And lies drip from your lips, I die a little more each time...forever.

sapphire_rain7 12-Jul-02/9:45 PM
i like how you put so much into one short poem. some people can write epic long poems, and still not really say anything.




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