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Trust?
(
Free verse
) by
daehtop
As the earth slows, Promises of love are vanquished in the sky. Put yourself in my shoes. As darkness closes in around you, And lies drip from your lips, I die a little more each time...forever.
dreadedepisode
28-Aug-02/11:45 AM
Everything fits so well together - the title, the words, the emotions ... I feel like I can put myself in your shoes - very well done!
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