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Trust? (Free verse) by daehtop

As the earth slows, Promises of love are vanquished in the sky. Put yourself in my shoes. As darkness closes in around you, And lies drip from your lips, I die a little more each time...forever.

dreadedepisode 28-Aug-02/11:45 AM
Everything fits so well together - the title, the words, the emotions ... I feel like I can put myself in your shoes - very well done!




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