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Hands (Free verse) by cattatplay
Hands beneath the table and your brother touching parts of me Smiles for all the family silent exercise in how to be Cried my soul in silence Tell me Mother how did you not see Hands beneath the table and your brother touching parts of me

Up the ladder: How Dare You Knock?
Down the ladder: untitled

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4166665
Weighted score: 5.304608
Overall Rank: 3654
Posted: July 10, 2002 2:50 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 2:50 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] nentwined @ 66.47.71.146 | 10-Jul-02/4:11 PM | Reply
very well done.
[9] deleted user @ 205.188.197.41 | 12-Jul-02/1:50 PM | Reply
I agree, well done.
[7] flatliner @ 209.178.179.219 | 28-Jul-02/9:56 PM | Reply
sad....I hope this helps relieve the pain
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Jul-02/10:25 PM | Reply
okay. i'm going to put my heart back in for just a second.. there..(i do dirty deeds done dirt cheap call me we will fuck this guy up with all kinds of different torture instruments..did he touch your vagina.. shit!.. nevermind me..of course he did..it was u_nder the table.. i say we quarter him with horses..who's with me..lynch mob..lych mob lynch mob. david lynch for president. merryl lynch investing.. sorry strayed..back to the hands and the message at hand. leave w. virginia, and smack your mom, kick your dad square in the nuts. light the whole place on fire...start over..god bless "sydney sheldon" IS A MOLESTED CHILD AND SO AM I" see that wasn't so bad..thanxe
[7] darylchew @ 202.156.2.130 | 5-Sep-04/6:56 AM | Reply
molest?
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