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Free verse № 3885

Hands

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

Hands beneath the table and your brother touching parts of me Smiles for all the family silent exercise in how to be Cried my soul in silence Tell me Mother how did you not see Hands beneath the table and your brother touching parts of me

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[10] nentwined 10-Jul-02/4:11 PM Reply
very well done.
[9] deleted user 12-Jul-02/1:50 PM Reply
I agree, well done.
[7] flatliner 28-Jul-02/9:56 PM Reply
sad....I hope this helps relieve the pain
[7] horus8 28-Jul-02/10:25 PM Reply
okay. i'm going to put my heart back in for just a second.. there..(i do dirty deeds done dirt cheap call me we will fuck this guy up with all kinds of different torture instruments..did he touch your vagina.. shit!.. nevermind me..of course he did..it was u_nder the table.. i say we quarter him with horses..who's with me..lynch mob..lych mob lynch mob. david lynch for president. merryl lynch investing.. sorry strayed..back to the hands and the message at hand. leave w. virginia, and smack your mom, kick your dad square in the nuts. light the whole place on fire...start over..god bless "sydney sheldon" IS A MOLESTED CHILD AND SO AM I" see that wasn't so bad..thanxe
[7] darylchew 5-Sep-04/6:56 AM Reply
molest?