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dumb ho (Free verse) by sir_heff
She played with my heart threw it like a dart. she broke it in two i didnt have any glue. she fed me a lie i ate the whole pie. when she looked in my eye i wanted to die. she told me that I didnt have to try, that she was all mine. It felt so good inside. wanted to beleave her never wanted to leave her. but shes a deceiver holding a cleaver. with the look of death, she took my breath.

Up the ladder: Danse
Down the ladder: Part II:Rhetoric

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5525
Posted: January 8, 2003 9:14 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2003 9:14 AM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Jan-03/10:17 AM | Reply
is this your depilatory?
[7] RGallet @ 140.186.47.208 | 8-Jan-03/11:30 AM | Reply
You're an e short of the respect of poets worldwide. Liked it though. 7
[8] ChunkyHunkyMonkey @ 205.188.209.107 | 8-Jan-03/4:07 PM | Reply
dont worry i have been there b4 too and its painful but hey they alwayz come back to tell you dat it was a mistake and thzt they regret it
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