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dumb ho (Free verse) by sir_heff

She played with my heart threw it like a dart. she broke it in two i didnt have any glue. she fed me a lie i ate the whole pie. when she looked in my eye i wanted to die. she told me that I didnt have to try, that she was all mine. It felt so good inside. wanted to beleave her never wanted to leave her. but shes a deceiver holding a cleaver. with the look of death, she took my breath.

RGallet 8-Jan-03/11:30 AM
You're an e short of the respect of poets worldwide. Liked it though. 7




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