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why should i (Free verse) by kaykat So lost
I'm to the point
Where I can't be found
I'll just smoke another joint
I don't care anymore
Why should I
A kid with a death wish
So I curl up and die
Up the ladder:
Loneliness
Down the ladder:
Forever
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Posted: December 23, 2002 8:04 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2002 8:04 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.427826 Overall Rank: 12932 Comments:
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SP REYNOLDS @ 209.178.159.73
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24-Dec-02/3:01 PM
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Ok - ironically enough you've forced me to take you seriously - you said "drive around" so at least your old enough for that. Your poems, however, are missing a certain rat-tit-tat-tat. Let the smoke fill your brain, let go of mom and dad's processes with the rest of your distain... It'll all be better when you go to college:)
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kaykat @ 207.170.32.52
> SP REYNOLDS
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25-Dec-02/11:53 AM
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your in college!? where do you go? Umm, I don't know if you were trying to complement me but thanx!!
the line is "god, i wish i had another joint" and ironically i do? ah chewy whicky whicky chew. ha ha ha! those that don't smoke the kind iriee nugs are doomed to have their christmas tree's bleached. wew wew. chick shoe.o
Good.
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