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why should i (Free verse) by kaykat

So lost I'm to the point Where I can't be found I'll just smoke another joint I don't care anymore Why should I A kid with a death wish So I curl up and die

SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/3:01 PM
Ok - ironically enough you've forced me to take you seriously - you said "drive around" so at least your old enough for that. Your poems, however, are missing a certain rat-tit-tat-tat. Let the smoke fill your brain, let go of mom and dad's processes with the rest of your distain... It'll all be better when you go to college:)




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