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Seven Little Pills (Free verse) by kaykat I feel so lonely again
I swallow seven little pills
I know that I shouldn't
Pills and water my stomach fills
One hour later
I can't hold up my head
I'm gunna pass out
I need to go to bed
The room is spinning
I feel so weak
My hands are cold
I can barely speak
I get to my house
I go take a nap
When I wake up
There's puke on my lap
I feel better now
But the loneliness is back
I take seven pills again
Now everything is black
Up the ladder:
From Don ... For Me
Down the ladder:
what is he doing??
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Posted: December 23, 2002 9:05 AM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2002 9:06 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.713913 Overall Rank: 11950 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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23-Dec-02/12:35 PM
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okay here goes. i went to see your homepage, and i'm a bit confused did you get the pills from, mom, britt, or just some weird doctor. lol. also are you a real distressed human young lady, or a drunk old lonely man with a crippled and psychotic imagination? regardless of all of that said..this poem is to punkrock what moist towelletes are to steak eaters at a casino somewhere in winnemucca nevada.
Many people have told me that the best cure for lonliness is masturbation.
Actually, come to think of it, maybe those seven pills could be viagra...perhaps that many would cause so much blood to leave your head (the one up top that is) that you pass out?
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