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Turnarounds (Free verse) by dilips_10
When a coward bares his chest When a miser starts to spend When a flippant falls in love When a rapist marries his victim When an egoist cares for others When an atheist surrenders to God When a thief replaces his loot When a rioter makes good the loss When a drunkard smashes his bottle When a student bears canning with a smile When sulkers make amends again When an imposter reveals his identity When a scamster whistle-blows self When a liar confesses When a man breaks down It may sound absurd. But sometimes, it feels good For those who do What they do.

Up the ladder: Little Johnie's Jihad
Down the ladder: Stockport

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.8529015
Overall Rank: 1551
Posted: June 10, 2002 7:51 AM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2002 7:51 AM PDT
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Comments:
[1] beakism @ 213.122.179.80 | 10-Jun-02/7:56 AM | Reply
Wow. What an insight. Keep up the Good Work!!!!!
[8] god'swife @ 209.179.210.157 | 24-Aug-02/1:58 PM | Reply
Honesty makes up for so amyn mistakes. 8
[8] god'swife @ 209.179.210.157 | 24-Aug-02/2:01 PM | Reply
I made a mistake. "amyn" is suppose to be many. Honestly!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 24-Aug-02/2:40 PM | Reply
lol!! i guess we all make mistakes sometimes huh?!
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