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Turnarounds (Free verse) by dilips_10

When a coward bares his chest When a miser starts to spend When a flippant falls in love When a rapist marries his victim When an egoist cares for others When an atheist surrenders to God When a thief replaces his loot When a rioter makes good the loss When a drunkard smashes his bottle When a student bears canning with a smile When sulkers make amends again When an imposter reveals his identity When a scamster whistle-blows self When a liar confesses When a man breaks down It may sound absurd. But sometimes, it feels good For those who do What they do.

god'swife 24-Aug-02/2:01 PM
I made a mistake. "amyn" is suppose to be many. Honestly!




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