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Rapariffic (Haiku) by skaskowski
"Damn Kids" says the mom "You all give me a headache." We like loud music.
Up the ladder: Is She Worth It?
Down the ladder: Starving
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Weighted score: 4.8809543
Overall Rank: 10026
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
a little cliche, but I like the title.
[3]... anonymous @ | 12-May-02/5:23 AM | Reply
Traditional haiku is a witty way to express a higher thought. This:
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"Damn Kids" says the mom
"You all give me a headache."
We like loud music.
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Reminds me of a "See Spot" poem just to prove someone uunderstands the mechanics of the haiku. I would not even consider this a poem.
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-May-03/9:43 AM | Reply
Fuck you mom ele-
-ven is one more then ten you-
stupid fucking bitch.
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