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Rapariffic (Haiku) by skaskowski

"Damn Kids" says the mom "You all give me a headache." We like loud music.

anonymous 12-May-02/5:23 AM
Traditional haiku is a witty way to express a higher thought. This:
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"Damn Kids" says the mom
"You all give me a headache."
We like loud music.
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Reminds me of a "See Spot" poem just to prove someone uunderstands the mechanics of the haiku. I would not even consider this a poem.




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