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Short poem (Free verse) by blueclouds I couldn't stand to be left
in the presence of you...
now I only stand
in the hereafter..
Up the ladder:
Baby Steps
Down the ladder:
I Fell From a Dream
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Posted: October 7, 2002 2:22 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 2:22 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9327645 Overall Rank: 9133 Comments:
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1-Nov-02/8:37 PM
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I feel like I want a little more with this, but maybe that's just me. It is nice to see something short and sweet. You missed a dot on your last elipsis (sorry, I'm nit-picky ...I appreciate when people notice little things like that for me).
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