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I Fell From a Dream (Free verse) by x311
I slowly lift my head up from its resting place
On a pillow that cushioned the night's memories
As I awaken from that world so safe
I see snow falling outside my window
Slowly coming down and resting upon the ground
In the same way, tears fall from my eyes
From living in the clouds, I've fallen down
But it happened so slowly
I was floating so free
Until I hit that patch of earth
I now lie on the ground looking up
Knowing how good it was flying up there--so high
Laughing now as I cry
I know it can't be long now until I melt
What a cruel joke this all has been
Watching the other flakes liquefy
I scream out--send me someone
What little time I do have left, I can't spend alone
I don't want to be lonely
There is so much love in my heart to give
Please let someone share it with me
Let her want to rest by my side
Let her want to live in my company
Let our souls melt together
As our bodies are melting away
It can be just like in my dreams
My dreams can come true, can't they?
More snowflakes fall to the ground
As my head returns to the pillow it rose from
My dreams are so much safer than here
I want to live my dreams
I want to share my dreams
I want to have my dreams come true
-Rick Gebhardt
10/20/02
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.9327645
Overall Rank: 9134
Posted: October 20, 2002 11:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 11:00 PM PDT
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