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Short poem (Free verse) by blueclouds

I couldn't stand to be left in the presence of you... now I only stand in the hereafter..

ThreeLittleBears 1-Nov-02/8:37 PM
I feel like I want a little more with this, but maybe that's just me. It is nice to see something short and sweet. You missed a dot on your last elipsis (sorry, I'm nit-picky ...I appreciate when people notice little things like that for me).




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