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The MV-perience (Haiku) by Modulo
Tight bodysuit girl. Maybe I can sneak a peak. Oh! She drives a porsche.. .

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1714287
Weighted score: 5.171371
Overall Rank: 4958
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST
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Comments:
[1]... anonymous @ | 19-Jul-01/10:03 AM | Reply
LOL!!! That's great
[1]... anonymous @ | 9-May-02/9:31 AM | Reply
That's funny.
[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 20-Jun-02/12:56 PM | Reply
I can't figure out the point-of-view or context for this.
[2] Amelia @ 198.146.141.194 | 11-Sep-02/1:10 PM | Reply
Huh?(contemplates...)
[9] embersandenvelopes @ 24.152.203.178 | 6-Apr-04/9:46 PM | Reply
haha...cute
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 > embersandenvelopes | 13-Apr-04/5:35 AM | Reply
As you wistfully stare at the tattered empty styrofoam pouch which, until only seconds before, held three Big Macs, remember that you have a beautiful BEAUTIFUL soul enclosed in an alabaster suit of body cheese.
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