The time doesnât matter

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Dec 2008 · Edited 21 Dec 2008 · 1 comment

The time doesnât matter Where I'm standing on the shore of past Facing the sea of future patiently Those waves are waving at me restlessly The only thing matters is the sun It's coming on the stage of a powerful play And my role is what I'm trying to do best To bring back not the past or something That I've forgotten Something I'm looking for Something it might end in the hopeless tears But at the end there is the light It makes hopes to find To find what I came forward To find what I stand alone for

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[5] nentwined 5-Mar-09/10:58 PM Reply

I like the setting, but not the poem, and not where it ends. Still, I think you've got a seed here, if you can nurture it to grow (and I don't mean in length, so much).