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A picture of a thought (Free verse) by Holy Sinner
ghost walk through halls of barren winter snow leaving in a wake of flurried thoughts a vision so uncretain and unclear it may even not be there. was this vision a figment of some greater thought or simply a strand of what may be could this vison just be you a picture so faded from the past a wisp in a though and only a nick in time could this ghost be what you left behind or is it simply just a vision so uncertain it may never be seen again.

Up the ladder: procrastination
Down the ladder: Devoured

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8150
Posted: April 15, 2008 8:00 PM PDT; Last modified: April 15, 2008 8:00 PM PDT
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